Selasa, 29 April 2014

My assignment 6 writing 3


IF I COULD GO BACK IN TIME

If I could go back in time I want to register oneself in stewardess but first my parent can’t fund if I education In stewardees because to sign up must need a lot of money. I must hear what the speak my parent if I must closing my purpose become someone stewardess is not allowed because of economic problems. Now I must to closing it and I still remember my purpose sometimes when I see someone wearing a uniform cost I fell sad and envy why I am cann’t like the other but I must to go back not may sign up to it but global economic first can’t support.
So although I can’t sign up to it I must study hard to help my parent to can support my brother want to army and I must can be someone be success and must prove to my father if I can like a the other. And then I must can make happy my parent which always give me spirit and give me support and has raised me up to now. And if I be sucsess I want to dispatch to my parent to hajj, my mother always said to me don’t listen what the other said about what the said because many people do not to me to my mother and I must to prove to our my family from my father if I can success like a people although without them off all. Although my parent never come to me and must to study hard again.
And I want to if could go back in time I want to meet and play together with my friend’s in SMK especially my best friend eka susanti because when I sad.cry,happy her always beside me and I am very sad and very sin when her married I can’t come because I college and not holiday. But when I go back in my home I already goto her home I want to meet her but when I to this home her not already in home because her alredy go back in her husband. And always still remember her because I and her ever said if I always remember about we are do in school and her ever said if her want to college in Darmaja university but I don’t know why her can’t follow me continue college to. Now I hope when I could go back in time I want make happy the people around me, especially my parents. To my friend’s remember I want remember about you’re about do to you’re and I hope I can meet you’re again.



Selasa, 22 April 2014

Assignment 5 writing 3



A.   Definition of Narrative Writing
Narrative Text is a text which contain about story (fiction/non fiction/tales/folktales/fables/myths/epic) and its plot consitsof climax of the story (complication) then followed by the resolution. A narrative text is a text amuse, entertain and deal with actual or vicarious experience in different ways.
A.   Generic Structure of Narrative
1.     Orientation : Describing the participants and informing the time and the place. It also introduce some characters involved in this genre.
2.    Complication : Describing the rising crises which the participants have to do with or among participants relationship in a proscess of social interaction.
3.    Resolution : Showing the way of participant to solve the cries,better,or worse.
4.    Coda with summarizes the point of the story and moral message we may get.
B.    Language Form of Narrative
1.     Using process verbs : tell, says, narrates.
2.    Using temporal Conjuction : Chronological Order.
3.    Using Simple Past Tense : Present Tense, and  Future Tense, Present Perfect, Present Continuous and Past Continuous.

B.    Different gendre of Narrative and the other writing
Purpose : To amuse, entertain, and to deal with actual or vicarious experience in different ways. Narrative deal wwith problematic events which lead to a crisis or lurning point of some kind, which in turn finds a resolution.
Type of Narrative : Adventure, mystery, science fiction,fantasy, historical fiction, contemporary fiction, dilemma, stories, dialogue, myths, legends, fairy tales, fables.
Generic Structure :
a.    Orientation : Sets the scene and introduces the participant
b.    Evaluation : A stepping back to evaluate the plight.
c.    Complication : A crisis arises.
d.    Resolution : The crisis is resolved, for better or for wore.
e.    Re-orientation : Optional.

Significant exicogrammatical features :
a.    Focus and spesific and usually individualized participant.
b.    Use of material processes (and in this text,behavioual and verbal processes)
c.    Use of relational processes and mental processes.
d.    Use of temporal conjuctions and temporal circumstances
e.    Use of past tense.


C.    How to writing narrative and steps?
A good narration tell a story in an interesting way by adding elements of suspense so that the readers will want to know how the story will turn out. The word narrative means a story, so narrative is where you tell a story, meaning a fiction piece of work a short story.
1.     The first step : we must define the topic
Example : My great Experience

2.    The second step : we must to write sentences and develop it with the perfect development to be known trouble spots in the narrative writing and we must pay attention to the steps that we are doing every step of the.

a.    We must in writing the narrative we have to pay attention to the orientation of generic structurenya. Orientation included is the introduction of the
1.Who the story
2. Place in the story,
3.Where the incident and when the incident occurred.
Example : Once upon time when I school in vocational hight school I have many friends and I so enjoyed play together with my friends. But I always remember one my best friend when I in SMK she is Eka. She is my best friend I when I cry her always entertained I, always give me spirit when I down. But now I can’t together with her because from I past in SMK I think I must to continuing education in next level but I know if my friend same with me want to continue education.my best friend Eka did not continue his education as he instead chose my life to get married I feel I sad because I can’t together again when I play, happy or sad. And then my friend already choose new live with her husbands.

3.    We must to determine the beginning of the story to the climax of the story
Example : First I try to registered in IAIN Raden Intan Bandar Lampung I actually do not wish to enroll in the campus in Bandar Lampung because I not interested at all for college in bandar lampung but my father always told me to go to college. After that from the beginning I just wanted to go to in UM.after announcement that I did not pass on me in order IAIN Darmajaya list but since I was not interested in his lecture there late so I did not enroll there.When I enroll in Muhammadiyah University of Metro I not I do not talk that I would enroll in UM.At the time when my friend stay in metro get information if my name is on the list of the names of students who graduated in English education I verry happy when I see yes right my name in sequence number 27. After I past in here I already give information to my parents First my father was very surprised to hear the information but in the end I allowed her to go to college in the metro. But if I told to my father he is certainly will not give permission to me. I feel guilty to my parents, especially my father  because I did not ask for permission to enrolled here. But now I must prove to my father if I can be sucsess and I am sorry dad if I not listen to your speak but this is my decision this is my choose to continue college in Metro city. From I live in metro city until now my parent have never come to my boarding house. I ever shy when I in class but my speak not good like a my friends but I must to try and study hard again. So my great experience is a I can choose where I must continue my college. Now I feel proud to be a student in Muhammadiyah University of Metro. First I try to registered in IAIN Raden Intan Bandar Lampung I actually do not wish to enroll in the campus in Bandar Lampung because I not interested at all for college in bandar lampung but my father always told me to go to college. After that from the beginning I just wanted to go to in UM.after announcement that I did not pass on me in order IAIN Darmajaya list but since I was not interested in his lecture there late so I did not enroll there.When I enroll in Muhammadiyah University of Metro I not I do not talk that I would enroll in UM.At the time when my friend stay in metro get information if my name is on the list of the names of students who graduated in English education I verry happy when I see yes right my name in sequence number 27. After I past in here I already give information to my parents First my father was very surprised to hear the information but in the end I allowed her to go to college in the metro. But if I told to my father he is certainly will not give permission to me. I feel guilty to my parents, especially my father  because I did not ask for permission to enrolled here. But now I must prove to my father if I can be sucsess and I am sorry dad if I not listen to your speak but this is my decision this is my choose to continue college in Metro city. From I live in metro city until now my parent have never come to my boarding house. I ever shy when I in class but my speak not good like a my friends but I must to try and study hard again. So my great experience is a I can choose where I must continue my college. Now I feel proud to be a student in Muhammadiyah University of Metro.

4.    We must to Determine resolution of complication or problem in the story. Resolution is showing the way of participant to solve the crises, better or worse. The end can be open or closed ended. and also need to know where his conclusions.
Example : I must to fighting alone must denied the words of the my parents. And then I must to study hard to proud of my parents and my family who have been given and defended me

5.    We must to Establish coda or which summarizes the point of the story and moral massage we may get
Example : especially my mother who always prayed for me and always advised me to be patient and strong in life. and while studying here I get the teachings and religious norms are many and need to be increased again in order to instill good learning
Last step is you have to make sure the content of your posts is to entertain, sad or facts must be determined and also the end of the story.


D.   Determine Topic sentence Of The Narrative Below

My great Experience

Once upon time when I school in vocational hight school I have many friends and I so enjoyed play together with my friends. But I always remember one my best friend when I in SMK she is Eka. She is my best friend I when I cry her always entertained I, always give me spirit when I down. But now I can’t together with her because from I past in SMK I think I must to continuing education in next level but I know if my friend same with me want to continue education.my best friend Eka did not continue his education as he instead chose my life to get married I feel I sad because I can’t together again when I play, happy or sad. And then my friend already choose new live with her husbands.
 First I try to registered in IAIN Raden Intan Bandar Lampung I actually do not wish to enroll in the campus in Bandar Lampung because I not interested at all for college in bandar lampung but my father always told me to go to college. After that from the beginning I just wanted to go to in UM.after announcement that I did not pass on me in order IAIN Darmajaya list but since I was not interested in his lecture there late so I did not enroll there.When I enroll in Muhammadiyah University of Metro I not I do not talk that I would enroll in UM.At the time when my friend stay in metro get information if my name is on the list of the names of students who graduated in English education I verry happy when I see yes right my name in sequence number 27. After I past in here I already give information to my parents First my father was very surprised to hear the information but in the end I allowed her to go to college in the metro. But if I told to my father he is certainly will not give permission to me. I feel guilty to my parents, especially my father  because I did not ask for permission to enrolled here. But now I must prove to my father if I can be sucsess and I am sorry dad if I not listen to your speak but this is my decision this is my choose to continue college in Metro city. From I live in metro city until now my parent have never come to my boarding house. I ever shy when I in class but my speak not good like a my friends but I must to try and study hard again. So my great experience is a I can choose where I must continue my college. Now I feel proud to be a student in Muhammadiyah University of Metro. So guys it’s my great experience when I must to fighting alone must denied the words of the my parents. And then I must to study hard to proud of my parents and my family who have been given and defended me. especially my mother who always prayed for me and always advised me to be patient and strong in life. and while studying here I get the teachings and religious norms are many and need to be increased again in order to instill good learning.

Note :
Blue Colour is Topic Sentence because This is the main topic sentence in the story and determine the main idea of the story
Blue Colour is Topic Sentence Two Because in main idea the paragraph is the first is a topic sentence in two paragraph which tells the story of the beginning of the beginning